"Suspect allegedly shot someone with shotgun shell filled with breakfast cereal."
Big long story omitting crucial info.
What KIND of cereal? It's the most important detail the reader wants to know. Captain Crunch would be as deadly a #4 Goose Shot.
Oh wait, read to the end. It was Rice Krispies. My bad.
And all of a sudden, I was ten years old
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I am surprised at my reaction to the Artemis II mission. I mean, it's a
huge bucket of money to throw at well connected aerospace contractors - and
one ...
8 hours ago

1 comment:
That guy is lucky--muesli would have gone clean through him.
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