"Suspect allegedly shot someone with shotgun shell filled with breakfast cereal."
Big long story omitting crucial info.
What KIND of cereal? It's the most important detail the reader wants to know. Captain Crunch would be as deadly a #4 Goose Shot.
Oh wait, read to the end. It was Rice Krispies. My bad.
A Roaring March Day
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This morning, it was over 70 degrees outside and dark, as
thunderstorms -- even a tornado or two, farther north -- rumbled across the
state. By midd...
5 hours ago
1 comment:
That guy is lucky--muesli would have gone clean through him.
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